Thursday, September 17, 2020

Gruffalo

Today I had to rewrite the story in a diffrent viersion

I changed the snake into a crocodile.

First part I changed was the mouse was falling down a waterfall on a log when he fell on the log he got knocked out. 

When he woke up he was at a swamp where the crocodiles live.

He jumped on everysingle crocodile but he fell on the last one.

He got away by lying about a gruffalo I changed the gruffalo by saying he haid spikes all over his back and sharp teeth and his favourite food is crocodile cake.

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