Today I had to rewrite the story in a diffrent viersion
I changed the snake into a crocodile.
First part I changed was the mouse was falling down a waterfall on a log when he fell on the log he got knocked out.
When he woke up he was at a swamp where the crocodiles live.
He jumped on everysingle crocodile but he fell on the last one.
He got away by lying about a gruffalo I changed the gruffalo by saying he haid spikes all over his back and sharp teeth and his favourite food is crocodile cake.
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