I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School, Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie.
Today for summer lurning journey we comented on someones blogpost.
I commented on Room 2 the feed back i gave them was to try to explain why they had fun, and to try to write more.
Kia ora Marawan,Thank you for sharing your encouraging comment!You gave some great suggestions. Can you think of something positive you could have added too? It’s always nice to receive a compliment on work that you have done. Do you like receiving comments on your work? I love giving feedback to our bloggers.Keep up the great work!Charlotte, SLJ team
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Kia ora Marawan,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your encouraging comment!
You gave some great suggestions. Can you think of something positive you could have added too? It’s always nice to receive a compliment on work that you have done.
Do you like receiving comments on your work? I love giving feedback to our bloggers.
Keep up the great work!
Charlotte, SLJ team